This Girl Is a Pretty Young Thing.

This Michel Jackson’s song was more of a film. If you need some inspiration, I got you on my back.

Jeof Ogire🥇
4 min readFeb 6, 2022
Snapshot):-by Jeofrey Ogire, source–YouTube

Mike and Chris Tucker we’re having dinner together at “The Waterfront Hotel. It looks as though they had been going there before. So, this time around, one person was meant to clear the bill but none of them was willing to do so. They fell into a little argument.

“You’re paying for it this time, men.” ‘I’m paying for it?’ “No no no, I paid for it last time, you pay it this time.”

You know I wanted to go, and not me.’You wanted me to come in.’

“You see that’s why I don’t like to eat with black people because when the bill comes, they start tripping.” ‘Yeah, yeah, yeah, that’s what you planned for.’

While that is happening, a repeated tapping sound comes from the other side of the road. ‘Squeak’, ‘squeak’, ‘squeak' — it is a girl. She passes right in front of the two geezers— Mike and Chris and they sound like;-

“Woohoo! Luke-du. It's jargon meaning—look at that”

“Hm!”, ‘check her.’

“She looks homeless.”

While they are still astonished by what they see, there is another footfall coming from the other side. A tall slender dark-skinned girl strolls in and rushes into the other group of thugs.

She is probably a servant of the boss man. You dare not interfere with this man but mike is tempted to for he is Gold rather than Silver.

“Woooo!’’’

“Stuttering, right?”

‘Oh, my God!’

“This girl is a pretty young thing.” “Come in.”

Screenshot_source:–YouTube

‘She is still looking at me.’ ‘That girl is mine, you know it.’ “OMG! Chris, that’s it.” “That is what I’ve been seeing all day.”

The first girl wends her way across the road from the hotel and heads to the next pub. But she shows signs of desperation so Mike followed. Mike is so desperate for her too.

Chris is more desperate but he doesn’t want to greatly express his feeling. Mike might ask him to clear the food bill.

“Hey!” ‘Chemo’… “hey! hey! come here.”

She leads them to a bar and they follow her.

“She’s pretty.” ‘So, pretty.’ “She needs somebody in her home.” “Let’s go.” — ‘laughter……’

They stripped out of the hotel towards the bar and didn’t want to pay for the food.

“Hey! You forgot to pay today” —

Shouts the hotel owner, who seems to be Chinese or the equivalent.

“We’ll pay you tomorrow.”– Mike replies.

“Come on, come on, next time I see you, I will chop your head.”

This story was inspired by one of the Late Michael Jackson’s songs produced in 2001.

I picked an interest in writing about this after watching an extended Vevo version of the song on YouTube.

Written and composed by Michael Jackson, Rodney Jerkins, and Fred Jerkins III, this falls in the classic film genre — thriller.

What an amazing composition it is!

Also, check out “Mysterious Girl” from the same genre. Oh, my God!

I like the setup and when I listen to its audio, I see everything as is in the video.

If you can recognize the title of the song, you must be a big fan of his music just like I am.

Name the title of the song.

Put your answer here_____________________

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A big shout-out to this Author, mauludSADIQ— a Hip-Hop investigator and b-boy lover. He wrote a very nice story about Michael Jackson’s music Albums which I enjoyed reading.

Another big shout-out to the people I follow and read. Well-done team, this February, we expect to grow bigger from our yesterday. So, don't loosen the nuts. The bolts are still functional as we still have the charisma to go on.

Thank you so much for reading my short story, I hope you enjoyed it. Let's see you around next time.

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Jeof Ogire🥇

Crafting persuasive stories on screen and paper. Screenwriter, publication editor, and film producer riveting hearts and minds, weaving fascinating narratives.